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作者: huhuhahahaha    时间: 2006-8-17 17:37:04     标题: craig david 7 days

这是第一次发贴, 希望大家多提提意见吧! 哈哈
PS 请听完哦, 歌尾有我自己加的内容
作者: 回头太难    时间: 2006-8-17 18:35:36

还是不错,你得声音好直啊.唱得手忙脚乱得.:)
作者: huhuhahahaha    时间: 2006-8-17 18:39:52

中间歌词太难唱       哈哈
作者: 天外飞仙_9999    时间: 2006-8-17 19:49:33     标题: 加油!!!加油!!!!

你可以把声音在放出来一点,有点闷
作者: Ability    时间: 2006-8-18 01:55:45

你的气息还不错,嗓音其实也还是可以的. 但绝不是唱英语歌的嗓音,这点请你记住.
你第一次就唱CD的歌,唱的水平就不多讲了.
《7 Days》:音调有一点出入,发音不算太差.语速快的歌词想浑水摸鱼躲过去,结果弄巧成拙.
另一首速度比较慢,稍微好一点。结合你的还不错的发音,能体现出你嗓音的一点优势,但请记住,你要唱英语歌的话,要更多的磨练才行。

多练习练习,希望以后能多唱几首CD的歌,再帮你点评点评。
作者: 俏俏    时间: 2006-8-18 09:52:28

有些字漏掉了。。。。这样混过去不是很舒服
呵呵
cd我超级喜欢所以要求也要高哈哈~~
楼主适合稍稍慢点的歌~ 我觉得
并且 建议把麦换了
作者: songxiaorui    时间: 2006-8-18 11:32:53

On my way to see my friends
who lived a couple blocks away from me (owh)
As I walked through the subway
it must have been about quarter past three
In front of me
stood a beautiful honey with a beautiful body
She asked me for the time
I said it´d cost her her name
a six digit number & a date with me tomorrow at nine
Did she decline? No
Didn´t she mind? I don´t think so
Was it for real? Damn sure
What was the deal? A pretty girl aged 24
So was she keen? She couldn´t wait
Cinnamon queen? let me update
What did she say? She said she´d love to
rendezvous
She asked me what we were gonna do
said we´d start with a bottle of moet for two
Chorus
Monday
took her for a drink on Tuesday
we were making love by Wednesday
and on Thursday & Friday & Saturday we chilled on Sunday
I met this girl on Monday
took her for a drink on Tuesday
we were making love by Wednesday
and on Thursday & Friday & Saturday we chilled on Sunday
Verse 2
Nine was the time
cos I´ll be getting mine
and she was looking fine
Smooth talker
she told me
She´d love to unfold me all night long
Ooh I loved the way she kicked it
from the front to back she flipped (back she flipped it, ooh the
way she
kicked it)
And I oh oh I yeah
hope that she´d care
cos I´m a man who´ll always be there
Ooh yeah
I´m not a man to play around baby
Ooh yeah
cos a one night stand isn´t really fair
From the first impression girl hmm you don´t seem to be like that
Cos there´s no need to chat for there´ll be plenty for that
From the subway to my home
endless ringing of my phone
When you feeling all alone
all you gotta do
is just call me call me
Chorus
Monday
took her for a drink on Tuesday
we were making love by Wednesday
and on Thursday & Friday & Saturday we chilled on Sunday
I met this girl on Monday
took her for a drink on Tuesday
we were making love by Wednesday
and on Thursday & Friday & Saturday we chilled on Sunday
Bridge
(Break it down, uh break it down)
Since I met this special lady
ooh yeah
I can´t get her of my mind
She´s one of a kind
And I ain´t about to deny it
It´s a special kind thing
with you-oh.......
Chorus
Monday
took her for a drink on Tuesday
we were making love by Wednesday
and on Thursday & Friday & Saturday we chilled on Sunday
I met this girl on Monday
took her for a drink on Tuesday
we were making love by Wednesday
and on Thursday & Friday & Saturday we chilled on Sunday
作者: Rock兔子    时间: 2006-8-18 15:03:24

这歌真好听,头次听呢,lz唱的不错啊,效果再做做会更好啊,加油!
作者: lee0914    时间: 2006-8-18 18:59:08

发音``发音```感觉好象不太对```继续努力吧~
作者: Vinata    时间: 2006-8-19 12:46:05

声音好直......

还有发音内....加强哈...

还是值得表扬的...
作者: 筱珩    时间: 2006-8-19 13:00:25

注意力全放在发音上了,没有感情,发音还有些松懈.不过第一次唱已经不错了.加油!
作者: 寒极    时间: 2006-8-19 15:26:45

哈哈!!!好玩!!听的唱的偶好开心。。忙死了!!杂唱得这么可爱。。。。顶!!
作者: sword    时间: 2006-8-20 11:53:48

haha...吓我一跳,的确可爱,忙得不亦乐乎的样子...
作者: cash410    时间: 2006-8-22 13:23:25

其实唱得还是不错的,就是发音不够流畅,整个就影响了感觉
作者: oasisky    时间: 2006-8-24 02:54:59

呵呵还头次听人唱这首呢~~歌词太多了不容易啊~~~
作者: july    时间: 2006-8-24 03:11:35

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说句稍微专业些的话。。。表生气哦。。。
还是唱中文歌吧~~~或者试着POP一点的欧美音乐,这样会有好的发展~
作者: K    时间: 2006-9-4 11:52:03

哇....不好讲太伤人的话啊~
挖卡卡~   有空听下我很久前录的吧~还是自己和声的~
...谢谢楼主给我自信!!!
PS:我现在唱的更好了~
作者: K    时间: 2006-9-5 16:41:31

发现一个叫Ability的小鬼讲话好校长啊~
专业的乐评???.....我看不象...
挖卡卡~
作者: 宠爱O    时间: 2006-9-5 17:27:45

对噢!`
 LZ的声音好直噢!`
     怎么不转呢?
作者: eric0114    时间: 2007-10-6 23:28:16

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作者: YD    时间: 2007-10-7 01:19:30

您的名字好像我哥们儿啊  ,, 也喜欢这个歌曲 加油!!
作者: heiyu1412    时间: 2010-7-30 16:13:24

继续努力,我也很喜欢这歌
作者: bzk1992    时间: 2010-7-30 21:15:36

声音很模糊,貌似是在用喉咙唱歌,没有用气,所以很唱得很拖拉。马马虎虎,继续练习
作者: 学霸大大    时间: 2014-8-3 23:43:04

厉害啊555很棒啊啊
作者: lz5866    时间: 2015-1-27 23:05:50

很有节奏感的一首歌  喜欢....




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