JING-本人第一首原创歌曲<Promise>发布于2007-3-8

Christineyen

http://music.41388.com/6404661

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http://fc.332.com/play.aspx?reg_id=992312&song_id=1108592



终于…本人生平第一首原创歌曲…
好激动..这首歌是送给我过世的外公的.
录的时候来来回回哭了3次..有唱8下去的感觉
从作词到作曲,真想吐血..真的好开心能完成
也是加入HAZE的第一首歌..以后大家就要一起努力
希望大家都能支持这首歌..谢谢你们..
发布于2007-3-8 12:36:23

中文翻译

誓言

[CHORES]
想念你,梦着你,感受你.
现在,以前我都会好好的
帮住我走过那些困难痛苦的事情
时间从未改变这一切.
(听着我唱)

[VERES1]
当我还是一个小女孩
你总是一副什么事都不关心的样子
在我的记忆里
你总是沉没着
你在我儿时记忆中渐渐消散
当你病倒躺在病床上
让我成长了好多
第一次晚上失眠
想起你早上起来的时候
咖啡加牛奶,面包加肉
你看的中国连续剧, 52路公车
开学的第一天你带着我座公车.让我知道怎么去学校
让我找到你给我的爱.
当你离开我们的时候,所有都改变了.
我一个人座在公车上,想着你.
告诉我当过了74 公路 就下车
我的眼泪不停流.
有太多的感受想要表达,这首歌都不够表达.

[CHORES]

[VERSE2]
两年过去了
我还是记得你躺在病床上的画面
看看癌症对你做了什么
对我做了什么
听上去好讽刺,好悲剧化.
当我躺在病床上
我想念你, 试着感受你当时躺在这里的感觉.
你可能不知道,你对我的影响有多大.
我觉得好类,没有希望了.
好比有人在我生命的道路上盖了一面墙.
人们对我的看法改变了.他们欺骗我.
好象没人能懂我.
可是你,你从来没有抱怨过什么.
你告诉外婆你只想多活三年.
如果我可以我愿意把我的三年给你.

[CHORES]

[VERSE3]
现在是2007,又是一个新年.
大家都很好,ANDY九岁了.VIVIAN在努力学习.
外婆很好. 而我,在和病魔战斗.
因为你从来没放弃过.
所以我也不会放弃.
不管有多痛,我知道一切会好起来的.
我知道你在听这我唱这首歌.
这首歌是我第一首写的歌.
我希望你在天堂能快乐.
就算我们不在一起,我们的心也在一起.
我答应你,我会坚强.
我会珍惜生命,没有什么我办不到的.
我是-JING

Promise

Song/Lyrics: Jing

(os)Yeah, this song is for someone that I can never forget, I just wanna tell to, that I’ll love u forever. Even though when your in the heaven I’ll think of you all the time. And, I guess this song is for u.

[Chores]
Missin u. dreamin u. feelin u. right here.
It is now. It was then that I will be All right.
Holdin me through every thing that hurts so much
As time will not change.
(now hear me out)

[Verse1]
When I was a little girl
U would always be outside of everything
In my memories
U were quite as if nothing ever happens
Sometimes I even don’t think you care about things
U fade in my memories of childhood
Until u were sick on the bed
It made me grow up so much
The first time I couldn’t sleep at night
The early morning wakeups
Coffee with milk, bread with ham.
Chinese dramas. No.52 ETS
The first day of school u took the bus with me
So I could find my way to school
As if finding my way to your love.
But everything changed after you left
I sat on the bus all alone and think of you
What u used to tell me to ring the bell after you see the 74 ave sign
My tears would fall down
There are so much feelings about you
That its not even enough to express in this song
Hear me singin.

[Chores]

[Verse2]
It passed by 2 years from the day your gone
I can still remember the picture of you lying on the hospital bed
Cause look what cancer did to you
And what cancer did to me
Its seems so ironic and seems so tragic
When im lying on this bed
Im missin u, thinking u, feelin u, tryin to understand you here.
U maybe didn’t notice
But u where the one
And the only one who influence so much over all of this shit
I feel so tired feel so hopeless
As if someone stacked a wall in front of my living path
Then everything starts changing
People’s perspective, how they treat me, how they lie to me
How they cry at me.
Seems like no one understands me
Buy you, you never complained anything.
U did what they told you to
And said to grandma that you just wanted to live two or three more years
If I could ever, I will trade my 3 years for u
Know what im sayin?

[Chores]

[Verse3]
Now its 2007, here comes a new year.
Everyone is fine
Andy is nine years old already, Vivian is working hard
Grandma is doing well, and im fighting with the damn disease
Cause you never gave up
And im not going to give up
No matter how much it hurts
I know things are going to get better soon
And I know your listening to me singing this song
This song is the first song I ever written
I want you to be happy in heaven
Even we are apart, out souls are together
I know you can hear me singing
I promise u, I’ll stand up I’ll be strong
I’ll hold on to life. There is nothing I cant do
There is nothing I cant nothing I cant sing
There is nothing I cant let go of
Im gonna sing this song for you
This is JING

[Chores]

(os) yeah, sometimes its so hard to get through everything, but I promise you, from today on I’ll be as strong as you where. Thank you

Sean86

沙发...来自Canada的女孩子...首先为你爷爷的过世表示哀悼..
其次支持你的处女原创...rap很有力度.它是基于的感情而宣泄出来的.在世面上可以说是无敌的...
应该点亮的....申个精是比较人性化的....
而且很有意义...支持你....加油吧 期待你的其他优秀作品..

[ 本帖最后由 Sean86 于 2007-6-26 03:56 编辑 ]

Christineyen

thank you for listening to it...

my grandpa died two years ago. when i think of it now.its just sweet memories.
i dont feel sad anymore.

thanks again. i'll write more songs in the future.
keep an eye on it. haha

Gabe914

原来是一首hip-hop曲风的歌曲，LZ果然是很有实力，原创歌曲值得鼓励哦。
词、曲都是出自LZ自己吧？很厉害呀。
这已经是高出翻唱好几个级别的境界了。

Sean86

是呀.同意楼上的..再顶起..
.ZH的伴奏是自己的乐队做的...还是伴奏制作公司做的呀,,,?
我的原创都是自己用吉他做伴奏...效果都.........不行...

wooohu

hahaha~~~ 来支持了 。。现在听mm的歌真是让人眼前一亮的耳朵一亮亮的~~~~

Christineyen

thanx...

the music is from someone else.
i paid for it.
i tell him my idea and he mad it for me
im gonna soon buy a elec piano and start making my own songs
hope everyone keeps an eye on my stuffs

thanks again.

Christineyen

if u wanna use ur guitar
try getting a input line for the guitar
that goes to de bottom of it.
hope that would help...

Christineyen

up`.. on myself...- -

ed_chan

原创,进来支持一下^^
在翻唱这能看见这种作品,难得