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标题: √Eminem - Lose yourself,嘿嘿,我又来了~~ [打印本页]

作者: ╋╋╋╋╋╋    时间: 2007-10-19 13:06:28     标题: √Eminem - Lose yourself,嘿嘿,我又来了~~

上次发完了自己唱的stan之后,得到了一部分网友的支持,在这里谢谢大家了

这又是一首阿姆的,大家听听吧,自我感觉还可以,有什么想法尽管写下来


Eminem - Lose Yourself

Look, if you had one shot, one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted…One moment
Would you capture it or just let it slip?

His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
To drop bombs, but he keeps on forgettin
What he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth, but the words won't come out
He's chokin, how everybody's jokin now
The clock's run out, time's up over, bloah!
Snap back to reality, Oh there goes gravity
Oh, there goes Rabbit, he choked
He's so mad, but he won't give up that
Is he? No
He won't have it , he knows his whole back city's ropes
It don't matter, he's dope
He knows that, but he's broke
He's so stacked that he knows
When he goes back to his mobile home, that's when it's
Back to the lab again yo
This whole rap shit
He better go capture this moment and hope it don't pass him

You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo

The soul's escaping, through this hole that it's gaping
This world is mine for the taking
Make me king, as we move toward a, new world order
A normal life is borin, but superstardom's close to post mortar
It only grows harder, only grows hotter
He blows us all over these hoes is all on him
Coast to coast shows, he's know as the globetrotter
Lonely roads, God only knows
He's grown farther from home, he's no father
He goes home and barely knows his own daughter
But hold your nose cuz here goes the cold water
His bosses don't want him no mo, he's cold product
They moved on to the next schmoe who flows
He nose dove and sold nada
So the soap opera is told and unfolds
I suppose it's old potna, but the beat goes on
Da da dum da dum da da

You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo

No more games, I'ma change what you call rage
Tear this motha1234in roof off like 2 dogs caged
I was playin in the beginnin, the mood all changed
I been chewed up and spit out and booed off stage
But I kept rhymin and stepwritin the next cypher
Best believe somebody's payin the pied piper
All the pain inside amplified by the fact
That I can't get by with my 9 to 5
And I can't provide the right type of life for my family
Cuz man, these goddam food stamps don't buy diapers
And it's no movie, there's no Mekhi Phifer, this is my life
And these times are so hard and it's getting even harder
Tryin to feed and water my seed, plus
See dishonor caught up bein a father and a prima donna
Baby mama drama's screamin on and
Too much for me to wanna
Stay in one spot, another jam or not
Has gotten me to the point, I'm like a snail
I've got to formulate a plot fore I end up in jail or shot
Success is my only motha1234in option, failure's not
Mom, I love you, but this trail has got to go
I cannot grow old in Salem's lot
So here I go is my shot.
Feet fail me not cuz maybe the only opportunity that I got

You better lose yourself in the music, the moment
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
This opportunity comes once in a lifetime yo

You can do anything you set your mind to, man

[ 本帖最后由 ╋╋╋╋╋╋ 于 2007-10-23 10:23 编辑 ]
作者: kevinscottdj    时间: 2007-10-19 13:58:04

这玩意我去年也弄过,后悔当初没听Fker的话。。。
确实很难,好学不好唱。
LZ自己慢慢咀嚼吧,自己的歌才录好都感觉不错,久了,多比较一下,就有感觉了。
作者: djpanda    时间: 2007-10-21 11:26:57

楼主的签名很cool
节奏踩得也不错
就是如同楼上说所说 还有精进的空间
作者: fucku    时间: 2007-10-21 12:47:46

确实很难,好学不好唱。
LZ自己慢慢咀嚼吧,自己的歌才录好都感觉不错,久了,多比较一下,就有感觉了。
作者: Garing    时间: 2007-10-22 09:25:13

确实很难,好学不好唱。
LZ自己慢慢咀嚼吧,自己的歌才录好都感觉不错,久了,多比较一下,就有感觉了。
作者: 5736235    时间: 2007-10-23 05:16:17

你是拿着歌词在看着唱么??

不是念出来的这个歌....

虽然我不懂这个..但是从你的歌里我听不到一点激情,我听的只是一个机器...满脑子单词...实在不知道怎么说了....

说实话我有时候很生气..就是因为这个..

话说回来,能背了这么多单词,我还是比较佩服的`

仅此而已
作者: yzlx1225    时间: 2007-10-23 07:54:59     标题:

楼主,我劝你最好不要念经~唱歌之前还是加强英文的阅读训练吧
作者: ╋╋╋╋╋╋    时间: 2007-10-28 10:25:51

6,7 楼的同学搞笑了,
你们以为说唱就是念单词啊?!
你们以为背了很多单词就能唱出一首说唱来啊?!
那你们也来试试哇!

阿姆的歌你们有听过几首啊?!!!
作者: cyf163    时间: 2007-10-28 10:57:03     标题: 不要来火啊!

各有各方式啊~百花齐放不好吗?
作者: TOP-DJ    时间: 2007-10-28 11:26:47

支持LZ~67楼属于装B一族~
作者: Ann410    时间: 2007-10-28 12:07:54

:lol :lol :lol !!
作者: fangyuren    时间: 2007-10-28 12:16:16

这个很难了  唱不出阿母的味道就算你发音都很准< 人家的说唱感觉就是独特  这么好学你就可以出唱片了 啊
作者: 豌豆公主    时间: 2007-11-11 18:18:41

确实感觉不是很有情绪。。。说的不错
作者: hankling    时间: 2007-11-11 18:20:03

it's not bad...but u should get more work on it~
作者: Tu2    时间: 2007-11-12 11:11:04

RAP`````学了好久都还没入门``````节奏很重要``口语很重要``气势也很重要``
作者: 洋喊    时间: 2008-6-28 16:57:01

这个歌是说唱界的国歌 呵呵  你有胆量
作者: Gucci    时间: 2008-6-28 17:11:54

呀~~这是我最喜欢Shady的一首歌!
LZ唱的挺流利的,
似乎越往后越进入状态的样子,呵呵
不过貌似发音还是不够native,
加油喔!~~
作者: yuyi926328    时间: 2008-6-28 17:52:17

值得鼓励!我并不认为前一页某几位仁兄说的偏激话是对的,我觉得LZ踩节奏还好~就是有点缺乏乐感~但感觉还是出来了~特别是开始那里~

特别是七楼的,我不认为LZ需要做什么阅读训练,他已经很棒了。

六楼的也生气得很无聊,别人又不是特意这样的,再说,LZ也做得很好了。
作者: kivenlau1    时间: 2008-12-6 16:11:10

heihei感觉不错,不过好像声音听起来有点薄,多练习一下应该不错~~~~哈哈哈~




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