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[原创] √★WL·Group★继续添词写RAP!来自大学宿舍楼的灵感 What're you down foR [复制链接]

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发表于 2007-9-21 12:11:13 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
灵感来自我的室友,他在感情上遇到了一些问题,每天长嘘短叹,说实在的作兄弟的看着也不是个滋味,劝了好久但是都不见他拉长的老脸有一点回收,甚至时时还用摔东西来发泄。我真的很想提醒他这里住的人不止你一个人,坏心情是会传染的,但想想都是同学,这么讲没意思,但竟然有一天拿我开玩笑的话借题发挥朝我摔东西。

我就无语了,折腾了半个多月了,你们都在郁闷什么??

更有夸张的家伙,我们楼下的一群混蛋(就是我上一首 RAP 骂的那群败类)把消防栓给拆了。每天没完没了的大喊 “郁闷” 那我就写首歌问问这帮贱人 : what're you down for?

(附件在上传中)点击这里试听:http://fc.332.com/play.aspx?reg_id=241465&song_id=1325736

歌词(有些太个人话的信息估计大家也不会感兴趣,随便听听就好了):

what're you down for?

here we come again
and see what's hell there,
in the same building(I mean last time)
everything's silent but the phone guys
in the room in the path they're hanging everywhere

they don't say hi when you wanna get closer
I'm no monster why are you like a stragner?
what's your additude, hurt your brother
come on cheer up! don't you look further

(what? are you crazy? don't you know damn! I am down now and for busy!)

Oh, man, easy, jesus! I'm sorry!
just wanna help you from the drowning
I really wanna know what's the hell about?
why those young men so love to be down?
for now I'm asking! what!?

why? what're you down for?
don't you wanna break free  live the days like a 1234ing wild bird?
why? what're you down for?
now you care about the course and books and your messed future
boys, what're you down for?
do you feel no right, wanna get freak out to be cooler?
girls, what're you down for?
you're messed with dates and oh! the fashion goes faster!

(nothing in the world we have to treasure
coz all we need is just for fun, we swear
just do what you do don't pizz me off
or we're gonna slay you! don't you dare?  

now it's time for us to release
fooling around is nothing so let's cheese
we love to kill time that's our youth)

you son of the bitch you want this!?

why? what're you down for?
don't you wanna break free  live the days like a 1234ing wild bird?
why? what're you down for?
now you care about the course and books and your messed future
boys, what're you down for?
do you feel no right, wanna get freak out to be cooler?
girls, what're you down for?
you're messed with dates and oh! the fashion goes faster!

you jealous people who passed you no!
why do they feel so fine but you get flow?
ask yourself and go back time to show
so you found you're such an Asshole!

for what?

Yeah,Let's count, PC games, and gaint party
drinking somking and the car is fanncy
1234 some bitches you love this pusscy?
and plus wanna take drugs or something...

what's hell you think you're doing here
don't tell you're in blue and you fear, the fear and the fear, is getting near cos you can do nothing you're clear

about these kids I just had enough
they just complane what's not fair
see, they care about their parents less than what they wear but everything around them is more than OK
jewelry,money you're never low on cash
but nothing can't stop time's dashing
now you're standing here wonder why you're suck
you son of bitch you desive it!

why? what're you down for?
don't you wanna break free  live the days like a 1234ing wild bird?
why? what're you down for?
now you care about the course and books and your messed future
boys, what're you down for?
do you feel no right, wanna get freak out to be cooler?
girls, what're you down for?
you're messed with dates and oh! the fashion goes faster!
upset upset upset upset...

everbody~!!!here is a warning!!the electric power is going to ...
A: oh damn~! what do we do now?
B: a... maybe I should go and kill the dorm keeper or sth
A: are you crazy? you still on level 30!

man! what's the crap you got in your head? is there nothing else in the world you need to care about? just one idea here I need to share, is that you should figure out why you are here or not?
you're confused but you should knew that's true buddy it's the key to your doom! maybe when you got another point of view you won't mat at that everybody would be better than you!

why? what're you down for?
don't you wanna break free  live the days like a 1234ing wild bird?
why? what're you down for?
now you care about the course and books and your messed future
boys, what're you down for?
do you feel no right, wanna get freak out to be cooler?
girls, what're you down for?
you're messed with dates and oh! the fashion goes faster!

what're you down for? what're you down for? let me hear you say, what?
what're you down for? what're you down for? you're without your trace, what?
YA YA, bon voyage, and I worte this song for...

[ 本帖最后由 djpanda 于 2007-9-21 23:22 编辑 ]

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发表于 2007-9-21 13:16:10 |只看该作者
中间那个细嗓子和粗嗓子的对话是引用我们宿舍里的一段很有意思的对话:

魔兽中突然停电……
A:又停电了!
B:真想把宿管杀了……
C:算了吧,你那个号才30级

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发表于 2007-9-21 14:55:32 |只看该作者
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发表于 2007-9-21 15:34:26 |只看该作者

回复 #1 三角函数 的帖子

:funk: 不错哦,加油

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发表于 2007-9-21 15:35:31 |只看该作者

回复 #4 断水 的帖子

不错,加油哦, :victory:

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发表于 2007-9-21 18:25:40 |只看该作者
LS的,有水的嫌疑哦...
先占个位,回来再好好欣赏

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发表于 2007-9-21 22:00:19 |只看该作者
不是有水的嫌疑, 就是水啦~~~

无所谓的,我不怕人水的. 再顶一下,希望得到几位我喜欢的歌手的点评.

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发表于 2007-9-21 23:08:22 |只看该作者
哇。。这个 。。。出乎意料外的好听呀。。。。。。

这一大篇词,三角,你辛苦了~~~

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发表于 2007-9-21 23:23:45 |只看该作者

竞艳阿
后期 制作的也很有想象力
还以为是阿姆的作品
三角在rap上潜力是最大 啊
写词的能力 跪拜!

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发表于 2007-9-22 00:04:03 |只看该作者
前面像aaron后面还是像nick~哈哈~不过MS没听过nick唱rap...
这个特效挺厉害的!就是听不清词阿。。。
函数的创作还真像样的~不过我就大致听了个调调改天再好好看看歌词

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